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Sanctuary

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Watercolor paint and salt (texture) on 200 gsm watercolor paper.
Except from the background bubbles I'm happy with the result! :)
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hello, I'm ObsydianDreamer, here to give you a critique! Before I start, I'd just like to say that you're free to disregard anything I say - This is just my opinion on your piece. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

First of all, things I like:
You really made the watercolour work with this one. You have lovely textures (did you use salt?) and the soft colour gives the image a soothing and calming feel. I like how the purple tree stands out, and that the yellow windows create a nice contrast.

Now what you could improve:
Given that it's your own individual style and dream, picking what could be better is a bit difficult. Perhaps the only thing I can say is the background; while the texture of both the bubbles near the top and the colour ad salt wash near the bottom look good by themselves, they don't mesh together. If you did the image again, I'd suggest just picking one.

You have a lovely artistic style. Keep creating lovely artwork like this!